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0 posted 2000-04-11 12:15 PM

Walk Away

I want to remember everything about you
but you hurt me and it makes me want to forget
the things that scared my soul
Those things that haunt my mind
each night in my dreams

i don't want to remember the dream
you know the dream, the dream when we
walked hand in hand across ground of white
sky lite in red hearts lost in a sea of blue
I could see everything in your eyes except I love you
from me your eyes of blue strayed
everytime i remember i feel so alone and afraid

i walk alone a picture of you in hand
the scattered memories flood my mind again
again it hurts like the first time you left
but this time I know the ending all to well

You speek to me and all i feel is pain
if i were to feel anything it would be in vein
in reflection the irony sickens me
my heart could handle nomore so i turned and walked away


 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't might die.

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1 posted 2000-04-11 02:36 AM

I am glad you  had the strength to walk away. Staying in something so soul-destroying isn't worth it. I love this poem.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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