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One Body, Two Souls
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One Body, Two Souls |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
I look at you. And I still see that same person whom I loved so intensly. But now I see more. Now I see that cruelty in you, your coldness and uncaring. And instead of making me angry for your lies, or happy because I left, it just makes me sad. I know that you can be a kind caring person. But that side of you seems to have vanished. You seem to have this anger building up inside you. You seem to taunt me with it. You try to make me unhappy because I guess that makes you happy. Although you won't admit it, I know you're angry that I left you. I'm sorry and I still love you, but it's over for now. I hope someday you'll forgive me, and maybe that kind, caring man will overwhelm that cold, heartless jerk. </font> [This message has been edited by Tara (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a great poem!! Maybe you could call it "One body, two souls". I dunno but anyway I think it is a very good poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is a great poem....sorry...i suck at titles so i can't help you...but lizzie's suggestion seems to suit the poem well keep up the great posts Bec |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
What an excellent poem. I can so relate with that. If you want to talk just email me at send_lindsay@hotmail.com A title...hmmm! I can't think of one right now but I really like Lizzie's suggestion. Lindsay  [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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