Teen Poetry #2 |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
My feelings for you are nothing but love but your actions hurt me We were once getting closer but you just ran away leaving me confused You showed me you cared I thought that you felt the same way that you felt love for me too but now I'm just forgotten You hurt me so much and you lied to my friend you knew she would tell me what you said I believed it and I now I'm hurt and I don't understand Tell me please if I only wasted my time that I shouldn't have liked you so and why you didn't choose me instead My feelings for you were nothing but love but now only a mix of hate, confusion and disgust and I can't love someone like you My heart is telling me to give up all hopes of being with you and tearing me up inside I wished I could have been with you everyday of my life always with you I thought it could have been love but it was nothing but a lie a game with my emotions You used to be the only one I wanted the only one I wanted to be with and now it's only a dream What I felt for you was different from your other girlfriends it was real I had true feelings for you and you threw it away Don't think that you've ruined my life that I can't live without you because there will always come a day where I do meet my true love |
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Mustangbabe New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 3Oklahoma |
I love this poem. I can relate so well. You do good work. ![]() |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hey this poem is cool, and besides Confused is my better half LOL DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ Dana |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very good poem. I hope you find a real nice guy some time soon. I hope I do too! You really are too good to stay in Heartbreak Hotel for very long. Blue skies around the corner.... Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
Awesome work! I know how you must have felt while writing this. I feel like I'm part of that poem. I loved it. *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
i think it's already been said but good writing, There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats. -- Howard Aiken |
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