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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-10 05:49 PM



My feelings for you are nothing but love
but your actions hurt me

We were once getting closer
but you just ran away
leaving me confused

You showed me you cared
I thought that you felt the same way
that you felt love for me too
but now I'm just forgotten

You hurt me so much
and you lied to my friend
you knew she would tell me what you said

I believed it
and I now I'm hurt
and I don't understand

Tell me please if I only wasted my time
that I shouldn't have liked you so
and why you didn't choose me instead

My feelings for you were nothing but love
but now only a mix of hate, confusion and disgust
and I can't love someone like you

My heart is telling me to give up
all hopes of being with you
and tearing me up inside

I wished I could have been with you
everyday of my life
always with you

I thought it could have been love
but it was nothing but a lie
a game with my emotions

You used to be the only one I wanted
the only one I wanted to be with
and now it's only a dream

What I felt for you
was different from your other girlfriends
it was real

I had true feelings for you
and you threw it away

Don't think that you've ruined my life
that I can't live without you
because there will always come a day
where I do meet my true love

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
Mustangbabe
New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 3
Oklahoma
1 posted 2000-04-10 06:30 PM


I love this poem. I can relate so well. You do good work.  
dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
2 posted 2000-04-10 07:26 PM


Hey this poem is cool, and besides Confused is my better half LOL

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Dana

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-11 02:07 AM


This is a very good poem. I hope you find a real nice guy some time soon. I hope I do too! You really are too good to stay in Heartbreak Hotel for very long. Blue skies around the corner....

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
4 posted 2000-04-21 03:33 PM


Awesome work!  I know how you must have felt while writing this.  I feel like I'm part of that poem.  I loved it.

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

hoppy
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

5 posted 2000-04-21 03:41 PM


i think it's already been said but good writing,

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken



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