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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-04-04 04:04 PM


Teardrops fall,
All over.

They soak me,
From head to toe.

Now I stand here,
A tear stained mess.

I am forced to smile,
Everytyme you pass.



 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)



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natalie
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1 posted 2000-04-09 03:37 PM


I also have this feeling sometime, having to smile at somebody even if you don't feel like it, short but good poem, very good
natalie...

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2000-04-10 12:19 PM


This is a good poem. Try to be strong and hold your head up ok  

~AF~

 What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger



ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-10 05:30 AM


This is a very good poem...I think everybody feels this way at one time or another. Sic Vita.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Danny Holloway
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4 posted 2000-04-14 12:46 PM


Nice poem Tamma
(may i offer you a kleenix)
How's the publishing coming along??????


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


**Angel**
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5 posted 2000-04-14 02:51 PM


This is an excellent poem. It brought tears to my eyes! I'm serious!
I know the feeling Tamma... I know that feeling way too well.


Keep posting.

Lindsay

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