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Ashiraladoni
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-04-03 08:11 PM


You don't seem to understand.
You don't seem to really care.
You act like you care, but then you really dont.
What kind of friend do you call yourself?
You don't seem to understand.
You don't seem to really care.

Once I thought I could let you come back
Once I thought I could love you again
but now I've seen a side of you I dont like
very much.

You support things that I detest.
You play with fire
You play with Satan
I detest that.

How could you??
You don't seem to understand
You don't seem to really care.
You act like you care, but then you really dont.

I thought I loved you...
but yet again, you cease to amaze me
by doing something which
changes everything.

You don't seem to understand
You don't seem to care.
I was going to let you back
but now I never will.

© Copyright 2000 Heidi Wiitanen - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-04-03 11:16 PM


Very powerful and well done!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

kayli
Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

2 posted 2000-04-04 09:28 PM


awesome,
i have been here just in the past few months, its hard, but it gets better, good luck
good poem

later
~kayli

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