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Teen Poetry #2

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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-04-03 09:42 AM

I am born cursed.
This is what I face alone.
This is not a fare world but I have no choice I fight for my right to live in this world.
But I have been cut down so many people trying to stop me for my quest.
Why?
Why must they torture me, beat me, why don't I give up and surrender???
Who am I to receve this burden?
I never asked for it.
Oh Lord GOD Almight why did you pass this cup to me???
I am not worthey to serve you.
Look at me I cannot even stand on my own two feet.
Yet you look at me with such compassion.
Why?
Why do you love such a discraseful human
A follower of Jesus I once was along time ago.
So Lord why do you put up with me so much.
Wait I know why I just relized it,
The reason you have such compassion for me.
It is because you Love me!!!

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

1 posted 2000-04-03 09:44 AM

First of all I want to thank all of you for sticking by me for so long.
Another thing is the reason for this poem is Because I had alot on my cheast I had to realise.
Finally Sorry about all the typos
I am not good at english

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-04-03 01:54 PM

How about "Everlasting love" ? Anyway, I like your poetry, I hope you continue to post it...who cares about typos? It's the emotion behind that counts!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2000-04-03 11:13 PM

jytree, this is exellent. The emotion, the questions you ask. Many of us ask the same questions. I'm glad that God is a light that you can turn to. I'm not sure of a title, but keep up the good work!

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