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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-01 10:28 PM


Never forget
the pain in my eyes
when you said you were leaving

Never forget
the way I cried
when you said goodbye

Never forget
the love I gave you
before you left me here

Never forget
the way I kissed you
when you were with me

Never forget
the way I held you
after we made love

Never forget
the way I looked at you
when I said I loved you

Never forget
that I will always care for you
and that I will always love you


 

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

1 posted 2000-04-02 09:23 AM


you must be in a lot of pain if you loved this person so much as you say. I think he don't deserve your love, if he left you, I know it's hard to believe it, but you'll find someone else, someone better, who really deserves you.
Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
2 posted 2000-04-03 10:38 AM


wow, sounds like a big deal. makes me sad just reading it!
but i liked the format, good job
-Andy

poe_32
Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-04 05:42 PM


This poem is about my ex-boyfriend of course, but it doesn't bother me anymore. But thanks for all your comments.
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