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**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

0 posted 2000-03-31 02:04 PM

There's a little man and the rest of his evil clan
They live in my heart and cause me pain -this little man and his evil clan
When I give my heart to him they know it won't last -this little man and his evil clan
So they begin to do their heinous work - this little man and his evil clan
They poke and they prod, they are reckless with my heart
It brings tears to my eyes, and hurts me so - this little man and his evil clan
I call it a little man - but everyone knows who it really is
You are the heinous man and your little friends are your evil clan

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-03-31 02:24 PM

Nice interpretation. Great poem, keep up the good work.
Welcome to passions

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-31 02:49 PM

Angel, you convey well what your heart feels.
Keep control of your heart, away from the man and his clan.
Nice work

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-03-31 04:40 PM

This is a really good poem. I hope you manage to steer clear of this little man and his clan. Just be strong in the face of his evil.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:13 PM

Thank you so much! I really love this place. It is incredible. You guys have been very supportive and I thank you so much for that.

-Lindsay

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

5 posted 2000-03-31 07:18 PM

Awsome peice you have written here.Maby someday the little man and his evil clan will be defeated by your strong passion in poetry.
Keep up this awsome work!
Heart_on_sleeve

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

6 posted 2000-03-31 09:50 PM

this is excelent!!

great intepretation of the pain caused by another

smile and the days seem warmer

Bec

bulletproof2312
Junior Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 28
Beaumont Tx, 77707

7 posted 2000-03-31 10:42 PM

I absolutely love this poem! I like the repitition, it kinda makes it erie in a way (of course when you're weird like me alot of things are erie...) anyway, wonderful poem..*Smile On*

---Skye

"Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

8 posted 2000-03-31 10:49 PM

Great poem Angel!!!
I like the the rhythm and the syaing in it heheheh cute!!!
Dana 8o)

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