not a poem but needs to be said :o)

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Teen Poetry #2

not a poem but needs to be said :o)

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-28 06:02 PM

<font face="Arial, Arial, Verdana" color="#ff0000" size="2">don't you ever wonder why we are all here, what it all means, or why we even care? sometimes it all seems so pointless. i've lived my life with no direction or purpose. Blindly going day by day hoping not to be made out a fool.  i see my life flash before my eyes, and it only takes a second. then i realize i've made nothing of my life. i start to think:  if only i had paid attention, if only i had given it back, if only i had said no.  What good is that? "if's" only lead to more "if's" and then i'll start living my life in the past. i've done what i've done and can't change any of it.  now its too late to think back and too soon to look forward. i have to look NOW and do what i can.

sorry it's not a poem - but i just needed to get that off of my shoulders and you guys are the best listeners i know.  thanx

Pharon, I am going to move this over to feelings, where it is better suited and should get some more replies.  Please head over there to continue this.

-- pharon --</font>

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 03-28-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-03-28 06:17 PM

Hey, just because you didn't break this down into little lines doesn't mean this isn't a poem. I heard some poetic phrases in there. I hope you will keep trusting us to listen to you. Did you ever read the poem called 'Do You Believe in God?' that someone posted in here a while back? It's very true.

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