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MelBear
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since 2000-03-26
Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

0 posted 2000-03-27 04:49 PM


A flower
can give you power.

The smell of it
can put you in a happy fit.

If it comes from a guy
you might feel like you could fly.

They are good for holidays,
and touch a girls heart in special ways.

It can calm a fight,
or start a day off right.

So send out a flower or two and someone may be greatful to you.

© Copyright 2000 Melinda Hays - All Rights Reserved
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-03-28 05:48 AM


Another sweet poem, I love your poetry! You should try a different layout, like stanzas with 4 or 5 lines in them not only 2 lines allof the time. Keep posting!
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