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MelBear
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since 2000-03-26
Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi
0 posted 2000-03-26 09:22 PM

I don't bvelieve in love.. this is just a poem I wrote:
Is there a perfect mate,
brought by fate?
One who loves unconditionaly
with simple simplicity?
One who would be true,
and his love always felt new?
One who would take my hand,
and run with me though the beach sand?
With Complete devotion?
Their words like a love potion?
Always together
No matter the weather?
Maybe then I would no longer be naive.
Maybe then in love I would believe.
© Copyright 2000 Melinda Hays - All Rights Reserved
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-03-27 09:37 AM

Aw Mel, I hope you find a love you can believe in. Just listen to your heart, it will tell you where you can find true love.
StayC Woytas
New Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 8
2 posted 2000-03-27 05:13 PM

I hope you fall in love with perfection! Someone who will treat you good and better.  I hope you will never get hurt by love only made happy.  Good luck in love, StayC
*Nene*
Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16
3 posted 2000-03-28 06:26 PM

I love it.  Lots of emotion.
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