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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-03-26 12:21 PM




The sky is grey smelling like rain,
My heart held open for a moment of prayer;
The words come so slowly through the pain.
the spirit touching me, nothing can compare,
i bid him come in and never leave,
God, please move in my heart
the one hanging on my sleave;
it's time to let the healing start,
now is the time to make amends;
I feel the spirit about us,
As i hold the hand my friend;
Standing infront of darkened water
With tounge lifted high,
I found my heart by the way side;
And I gave God my life
from now till the end of time
3-26-00

 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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1 posted 2000-03-26 12:27 PM


To look into the rain and smile is a truely admirable accomplishment
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-26 07:37 AM


If you can stand in the rain and smile, the rain will soon give way to sun. Lovely poem.
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