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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-03-25 03:41 AM



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Whats the solution
For my insanity
Its my new years revolution
To forget and move on
One eighth of my life on this earth
Was spent in love with you
Desperately searching for some form of rebirth
To no avail, I find emptyness
What doesnt kill me now
Can only make me stronger
But I often I question how
I will survive through this
But then I think...
I can handle this
After all I am a man
So I leave you with a quote
From a favorite emo band

"and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me..."



 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-25 05:50 AM


this is powerful. and i think wow describes it. i am all muddled at the moment...hopefully i'll become a little stronger from the experience.

great worK

bEC

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-26 07:49 AM


Phew. This one heck of a poem. A lot to think about.
Kevin
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3 posted 2000-03-26 02:57 PM


its always kind of awakening when you compare a time in your life to it overall, 1/8th does sound overpowering in a way, but when you think about it, life is a bunch of little things, good times and bad, im sure your good times with her out wieghed the bad
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