Teen Poetry #2 |
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What doesnt kill me now |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
<center> Whats the solution For my insanity Its my new years revolution To forget and move on One eighth of my life on this earth Was spent in love with you Desperately searching for some form of rebirth To no avail, I find emptyness What doesnt kill me now Can only make me stronger But I often I question how I will survive through this But then I think... I can handle this After all I am a man So I leave you with a quote From a favorite emo band "and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me..." Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is powerful. and i think wow describes it. i am all muddled at the moment...hopefully i'll become a little stronger from the experience. great worK bEC ![]() |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Phew. This one heck of a poem. A lot to think about. |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
its always kind of awakening when you compare a time in your life to it overall, 1/8th does sound overpowering in a way, but when you think about it, life is a bunch of little things, good times and bad, im sure your good times with her out wieghed the bad |
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