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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
I am taking this off now. [This message has been edited by Lucius Cade (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I like this poem alot. Very nice work here. I liked the rhyme that you had in it. ~AF~ |
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Mellon Collie Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49united states of america |
dear lucius, this is a wonderful poem, but i have to admit that you've got me stumped over the meaning/significance of line 8-9. who is "he"? some underworld being? a rapist? i'm rather fuzzy on that issue. anyway, hope to learn soon. otherwise it'll drive me insane trying to figure it out *heh*. sincerely, the beautiful freak |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
POWERFUL STUFF!! |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
To tell you the truth, "he" is not really a thing, or a being at all. When I was writing this I was viewing "he" to be more like a force of life, acting on those who chose to live sinfully. But then again I left it open so you can interpret how you want. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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