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Dear Family!
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Dear Family! |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Nature has done wrong, and just continues to do worse. God I ask one question, can you relieve us from this curse. It’s hurts those who have tried, just to be ignored and denied. For this life is one that has been, tried and has died. It died long ago before, it could have the chance to grow. Just the thought of this miserable life, caws at my mind like a crow. Now for one last wish, to be relived from it’s weakness. Please clear the cloud of pain, and soothe away the stress. Bring sun shining in, warming our tired souls. Only to be rejuvenated so, are souls can be re-created. Let our peace of mind, get back on track. All we ask for is, our families life back. Deadicated to all the broken famlies! Truley Deano [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Deano~ Hey there! Can I say thank you for that poem? It's so much like my family... The divorces, the fights that just won't end, ect... I like it very much. ~Kristi Lynn  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is well written I feel. Lots of expression for sure. |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Thanx alot everyone for the support!! I Don't think I ever would of started sharing my poetry if there wasn't people like you! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I appreciate everything you've said in your poem. My family has been through many tragedies, death and terminal illness, fighting, hopelessness, depression... I can only echo your plea for God to bring healing. You write beautifully. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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