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Father since the day you past away
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ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
Father since the day you past away time has been standing still and day after day I say to my self this ain´t real Every night I pray that you´ll take care of me and the rest of the family Father your gone gone gone and away but you will always have a special place in my heart Father if you knew how much I cared how much I wanted to be there when you past away always wanted to tell to you´re face nobody can take your place the only one who can is you and you know that is true Father your gone gone and outta my life I never had A chance to tell have much I really loved you Father since the day you past away it tryed to make it through the day in any possible way try to do what I can to keep my head up Father if you knew how much I cared Father since the day you past away Brian Eggertsen |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Brian~ I like this poem a lot, although it is so sad... I'm sorry to hear the loss.  I'm here if you ever need to talk, though. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
A very good, but very sad poem. If you need to talk, just like Kristi said, I'll be glad to listen. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Good expression in this sad poem. I'm reminded of something I once read: Those we hold most dear never truly leave us. They live on in our memories, in the kindness they showed, the comfort they shared and the Love they brought into our lives. I believe your father would be proud of what you have written in this poem. |
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