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LoStInNYC New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 5 |
Debbie Debbie I love you so I wish there were someway that you could know I wish I did not have to keep all this loneliness within me- I wish I could show this to you and let you see. But this sadness and hurt I must keep Alone at night I shall weep. Things happen I guess I always seem to turn stuff into a mess. When was it that I failed? When was it that I wasn't there to your avail? I wish things could be like the way they were- Back in the summer when I used to matter. One year almost I can't believe Has it been that long, how could you leave? I messed up I know. Now I'm left out in the I should have thought things through 4 months ago Instead of ending here by myself sighing over my woes. I wish I could have done more for you I wish I wasn't such a worthless fool. We used to be so happy though How can it have changed so fast?!! I thought you said this would forever last. I guess it's my fault I guess I could not provide you with what you sought. I am ashamed at how weak I was So worthless and completely useless. Well I'll have to say I think I see why you would stop loving me- I can not provide like he. I wish I could let you know how I feel Debbie, But *sigh, These days you are so far away from me.... |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Cute poem. I'm sorry to hear about Debbie~ well, if it is a true poem from the heart. Keep up the good work. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
nice poem, somehow you take a very sad subject and keept it from becoming so very depressing like many of them that deal with this do. Welcome to passions, I hope you enjoy your stay. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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LoStInNYC New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 5 |
thanks for you comments... really appreciate it =) |
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KidS128111 Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 13Northern California |
welcome to passions! your poem is great. hope things work out with you and debbie. later. [email protected] |
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