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just please tell me
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KiKi Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 15 |
just tell me why why do you lead me on i just want to cry i just want you gone just look into my eyes and tell me the truth please tell me no lies please do this for me you say I can tell you anything anything at all but when I do you seem as you don't care you say I am your best girlfriend and that i will be- be until the end it doesn't seem that way to me I want something more I want you to be mine but you just shut your door just please tell me the truth do you want something more or do you want to run and hide hide behind that great door I am sick of waiting just tell me right here right now could there ever be a you and me? *if you love someone let them go, if they return their love was yours, if they don't their love wa never yours to begin with* |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
You wrote this with such earnest passion, you must be like me, always wanting more out of life than I have.  I like how you ended this with a question, it leaves me with an aura of hope, like you haven't quite givin up. Good job.*There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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