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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Darkness falls, So I dismade. I am afarid, Afarid of going out into the day. Why oh why am I this way, Made to be afarid of the day. Maybe oh maybe I can fit in But probually they will lock me in the looney bin. This is what I face eveyday This is a good reason to be afarid. Day or night I hunt or sleep. I pray they never find me. For if they find me I will awake and say oh "BLEEP" I will run so fast I feel like forest gump. Pray and hope I am not killed in the city dump. For you see, I want to die with dignety. More or less I want my last breath not to smell like garbage. In the distance all I here is run forest run. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I tried to be serious but it did not work so I goofed off and made it funny. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
It doesn't have to be serious to be a good poem, I liked it, and nothing else matters. Oh, sorry, It does, but hey, I'm just here- ummmmmm, sorta. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem. And who cares if it is serious or not?? I write goofy poems now and then, though they always turn out odd . . . Maybe I'll post one of them later this day. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
It was a serious topic spoken with humor, at least that's how I read it. Your overall idea came accross as well as it would have through melancholy phrases. I give you a thumbs up.  *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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