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Elilas Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 20The Dalles, Oregon, USA |
I plead guilty to love in the highest degree. But my love isn't of lust It is that of the deepest friendship. Like the deepest blue of the sunset on warm sumers night. It is that of the warmest passion of sweet lovers. Like the warm sand on your feet during a midnight strole on the beach. It is that of the stillest commitment of newly weds. Like the stillness of the midnight stars on your soul. So you see if loving my deepest friend, My warmest passion, And My stillest commitment is wrong; than I don't whant to be right. And if all this is a crime. I plead guilty to love in highest degree. Steven Ok Thanx alot guy's this is about my 3rd poem so to get a response like this is great and much apricated. You will all defintly see more of my work. Oh and I fixed the typo's and lay out.... your wright it dose read better. And for the record the person this poem is about is and will always be my best friend. She thought it was lovely too. Thanx Agin |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Steven, look forward to more of your work. You seem to have a desire to write and I feel you have some creativity within you. Still a few typos, but what the heck. Keep writing and I will be looking for you work. Danny |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great work....i really like this one and can totally relate to it. I never got a chance to welcome you to passions so Welcome! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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