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My cry for help! :[
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My cry for help! :[ |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Sometimes I wish I had someone near, I'm jealous with my friend's boyfriends here, I'm scared that I'm gonna be alone, Emotion burning inside me I want to show, I feel like I have no sight, I'm blind, Thoughts circling in confusion, my mind, Why am I alawys so damn lonely, I lost what I thought was a one and only, When you're used to love, single life is hell, If you're patient then in time all will be well, But I'm the most impatient person on the earth, I want to love a man for all he is worth, I miss loving arms around me, the words I love you, It's been so long since I've really felt it so true, I HATE all this loneliness, please make it stop, I HATE all this heartache, will he come or not?, I know my heart has just suffered way too much, Like all men take my heart and give it a good punch, It's hurts so much and the pain can kill, But when they love the heart will fill, My heart and soul feels warn and abused, I hope to god my past lovers are amused, Soon I will show them heartbreakers I'm strong, And that what they have done to me is wrong, I just wish to not be singled out, I run off and my friends "wonder" what about, As if it's so hard to concur, I wanna face love and conquer, But where is he waiting for me, The man right man holding the key, In my dreams for now he'll stay, Because I believe he will come someday. -Jennye Marie-Meshan "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
He will come some day hun. You have to have faith and while you wait become strong. Until you can love yourself fully and know without a doubt, true love will not come. I relate well to these words. Thanks for sharing  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jennye like Marilyn I too relate well to these words. It takes a long time to get over a hurt like the one you're talking about. I'm 33 and I still think about my first teenage relationship that lasted 4 years with him betraying me. But I am over him and have been married to the man of my dream for 12 years. Best Wishes LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"In my dreams for now he'll stay". Dreams are sometimes better than reality. Stay strong. Nice write. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was a great poem. I can relate to every word in it. Loneliness IS awful. You're not the only one. AND yes someday the right one shall come. If you ever need to talk to someone, I'm here. Feel free to e-mail me. Keep your head up high, and stay strong. (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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