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Embrace me Silence
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Embrace me Silence |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Embrace me Silence! In your presence, So many poets seek the Muse. They do not see the simple essence And take no knowledge from your lessons. They think of words to share their views. Just you and I, we laugh with pleasance,-- We understand-- words have no use! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Ummm... nice peom. Though I don't think words have no use. I really like the poem though, flows nicely. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Sometimes silence can tell you everything! Thank you for replying! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I agree with you Master, sometimes the only way of learning is through silence. Wonderful poem, such deep meaning from such few words. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you for responding LyricFetish! Glad that you and I share the same point of view! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem master! I like the way it flowed, but i also think words have great meaning and great use, but sometimes silence is nice, only sometimes. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Just like there are different kinds of words, there are different kinds of silence. But when two people can communicate without saying anything, that's something special. Thank you for responding. |
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