Teen Poetry #2 |
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Wow! Could it be? Yep, another new poem from me. |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
As I lay me down to sleep I give to you my heart to keep. Images of you run through my head. As I lay me down to bed. As I go to sleep this night I think of you and your smile so bright that it could do away with twilight's power Bringing the sun's light at midnight's hour. As I like in bed and dream I dream that you are here with me in my arms all safe and sound Our hearts together forever are bound. As I wake the following morn I find myself completely torn Between staying here in my body's home or going to you, my heart's home. As I struggle through the day Images of you light my way I'd do anything to get to you. But first, this day, I must get through. As I lay me down to sleep..... ------------------ "I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau "All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit." -Dana Carvey |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
How wistfully beautiful.....(sigh) ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
I like the continuity thing..v goot ![]() ------------------ ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~ |
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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
THis is Cletickat i made a few poems on here. But i really liked yours. kep it up. ------------------ You Live, You Love. You Die, what have you given |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
a very good poem. i hope to see more from you. |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
Beautiful! Keep Writing!! |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I liked your poem. Nothing I've ever written is as good as that. In my opinion. |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
I can really relate to this. To make ourselves feel better we imagine things as the way we would like them to be portrayed. Waking up in the morning and missing someone is an awful feeling. Nice job! |
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