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PEACEMAKER
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

0 posted 2000-03-13 08:38 AM



Ever day i walk
Down the same old path
Today i found something
Lay down in my way
A mountain was in front of me
A chuse i had to make
On which way i was to go
To get to that same place

A week has gone
Since i made my choice
On which way i was to go
But ever time
I reach this place
I see the path goes on

I take the path
Day by day
Fear not what is ahead
For i know the choices
I have made
Was done so in my head

I fell you all watching me
Judging what i do
I know if i had followed
I would still be there that day
Pondering my problem
Which was to copy you
Standing near the mountain
Not knowing what to do

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4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-14 05:08 AM


this is excellent!!
plz...continue to post...your poems are ace!

Bec

angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-14 11:06 AM


Good job on this poem, too.  I like it sooooo much...  Hope to see more from ya.
~Kristi Lynn    

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-03-31 07:14 AM


Brill poem!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


heart_on_sleeve
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:49 PM


Awsome poem! keep up this wonderful work.
bulletproof2312
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 28
Beaumont Tx, 77707
5 posted 2000-03-31 07:54 PM


Wonderful peom and so true...
*Peace Alwayas*


 "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther

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