Teen Poetry #2 |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this poem is kinda wacky...i needed something to write about and my friend suggested goldfish really being monkeys in disguise. well here you go egg ![]() have you ever really noticed that things are not always what they seem? at times there are illusions a barrier of expected themes. have you ever really taken the time to observe goldfish as they swim and dive? for the reality of the matter is that they are really monkeys in disguise have you ever looked carefully at people with weird hair styles? in actual fact they are aliens come to earth to co-write the 'X-files' have you ever considered the meaning of that common word 'love'? because it is far from just an emotion it's a priceless gift from above |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
ok.bec, im starting to worry about you, you are getting very very sad! ![]() Love mel ![]() |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
LOL!!!! :> I was only joking about the goldfish bec...but at least you made it comical. Very funny and nice rhyme you had going. EJ ![]() |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
This poem made me smile! If you put a couple more stanzas on it, you could have a song! Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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