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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I see the sun rissing, A new day to come, Dawn brings new hope, new joy, And the glory of the newborn sun. The red-gold birth of a new day, Seen in the eyes of a loved one, Joy of relation, renewed yet again, And waiting for a new day to come. The tide risses, and ships come in, great treasures, they say, reside in the hull, Treasures aplenty for one and all, And they all come when the ships take call. But the treasure I desire, The one I hold so dear, No ship that calls will ever bring, For the love of another is a precious thing. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
very well written!!! this is so true too - there is no price for the ones we love and no treasure can compare  |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely poem. What more can I say?~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
wow! how true you are. the love of another is an extremely precious thing and even more the true love of another is rare and priceless love doesn't come on ships...it comes riding on the tides of time excellent poem Bec |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hey Bec, thanks for all of the compliments. Oh, if you want to read a poem of mine that is really rather good I think the subject is "A new love found" I posted it friday so it shouldn't be too far back. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another well written poem that I love. Something that is so true, and you put it into words so well. Keep up the good work. ~Kristi Lynn |
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