I'm not supposed to (replies please!!)

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Teen Poetry #2

I'm not supposed to (replies please!!)

ILoveSrfrs
Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

0 posted 2000-03-08 11:03 PM

I'm not supposed to love you
I'm not supposed to care
I'm not supposed to live my whole life
Wishing you were there
I'm not supposed to lie awake
And think of you at night
I'm not supposed to dream about
The day I hold you tight
I'm not supposed to need you
Or hope you need me too
I'm not supposed to wonder
Where you are and what you do
My love is not supposed to grow
Even stronger every day
But I don't care what I'm supposed to do
I love you anyway

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

1 posted 2000-03-09 12:14 PM

*creeps back into Teen Forum*

Lovely poem. Sometimes love can't be controlled no matter how hard we strive to try and keep it from betraying us. It doesn't always lead us the right way, but it's pretty powerful all its own. Nice poem.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-03-09 02:32 AM

<div align="Center"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Arial, Verdana" color="#ff0000" size="2">Great poem
I like the last two line's:
But I don't care what I'm suppose to do
I love you anyway
Excellent
LoL</font></div><!signature-->

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-09-2000).]

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

3 posted 2000-03-09 11:10 AM

I agree with tracie66, this is very good. I sadly know how you feel, because I am there myself. Yet you have to remember to keep your head up and to always follow your heart. After all the only person you can trust completly is yourself, well until you're married. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Gina

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