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Teen Poetry #2

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sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

0 posted 2000-03-07 03:49 PM

Her eyes glow
like stars,
Her wings flutter
in the breeze,
Her feet dangle
in the air,
as she glides
into the open world.
Her arms stretch wide
for she now is free.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-03-07 04:01 PM

Free as a butterfly, what a natural high!

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

2 posted 2000-03-08 09:33 AM

Good poem, Gina. Something from you I haven't seen before, and I like it a lot. Lots of love,
Kristi Lynn

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

3 posted 2000-03-08 03:46 PM

Thnak you both very much. That's very nice. I wrote this poem awhile ago and never shared it with a soul because I didn't think it was verg good. Thanks again.
Gina

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-03-09 02:26 AM

Gina short but oh so sweet
The first thing I thought of when reading was the soul's butterfly
LoL tracie

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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