Teen Poetry #2 |
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Why, Oh Why |
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Poetic Dreams Junior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 23Lindsa, OKlahoma United States |
As the day wears on And time flys by I can't help but ask why. Why, did my grandfather have to die? He was kind, loving, and sweet. With intelligance all could see. All of us knew he was ill. But we didn't know it could kill. Sometimes it gets to me, And makes me cry And I don't know why. I know you are to feel sarrow and grief but I want peace In this aching heart you see. When he was ill I felt his pain Like it was in my very own veins But still I can't help but wonder Why, Oh Lord did you take him on his Wedding Day? *~~~~R.I.P ROBERT PERRY "PAPA"~~~~~* On August 27 my grandfather died of cancer. They didn't really pinpoint where it had started because it had spread so much. I really miss him. The reason I said "WHy, Oh Lord did you take him on his wedding day." Because 3 hours after he got married he died. My grandmother died of breast cancer 5 years ago. And on the day my grandfather got married to the other lady it was my real grandfather and mothers anniversary. I just want to tell you that it is hard to lose both grandparens to the same disease. Now my mother has breast cancer and they are saying it is a gen. So that gen is passed down from generation to generation. So that means I could be next in line. ------------------ ~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~ [This message has been edited by Poetic Dreams (edited 11-01-1999).] |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
aww this is very sad... my prayers with you my dear... keep writin.. it keeps you alive.. ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
first of all, i 'm sorry man i did not know any of my grandads, but your poem says it all, I hope you look after yourself, and your family, God bless you my friend. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I know how you feel. My grandfather is very sick right now in a nursing home. I wish, like you, that I could prevent dying of our loved ones. Very expressive poem. |
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