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AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-03-05 02:45 AM


Need.

Burning skin touching fiery desire,
Longing gazes caressing the unfelt touch,
Whispered cries of emotion felt within,
Bursting with life and twisting with need,
Clinging grasps slick with sweat,
Hot breaths pulsating and deep,
Thundering beats of hearts longing,
Hushed licks of throbbing pleasure,
Build then fade,
Fleeting moans of gasping dreams,
Undulating lust covering incandescent flesh,
Waves of passion igniting soulful hunger,
Releasing eroticism miraculously preserved,
Burning need,
Gasping breaths,
Thrusting desire,
Need.



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devil_tongue
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1 posted 2000-03-05 05:47 PM


Hmmm very nice poem here AngelShell. Tell me, is this in relation to you?....just curious


Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 2000-03-05 07:16 PM


Where did the Angel go?
Am I still in the Teen Forum?
WOW!UM Blushing

AngelShell
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3 posted 2000-03-06 12:22 PM


Thanks very must for the um...encouragement.
The poem was meant to signify ANY need, but, if you'd like to take it THAT way, by all means go ahead.  Like any poem, you understand it the way you see it...what does that tell you?

Yes, it could have something to do with me...but I guess you'll never find out.

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