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Screaming Conscience
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Screaming Conscience |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
I walk in my dreams, With nothing like they seem, Angelic words invade my ears, Like ancient wonders of many years, They sing their song as I walk into the shadows, Then lightness comes with fields and meadows, The air blowing in my hair, I feel an appealing stare, I turn and look to see you, You looking so down and so blue, I then know it's a significant other, From romantic past but you look like another, All my memories rush to me in a heartbeat, My temperture rises from the rushing heat, The thoughts run through me like a movie, Pictures of past lovers and ones that will be, Then I see the man of my wishes, Fill me up with lust and kisses, He seems so near yet so far away, The dream breaks because I want to stay, Then I see him standing there once more, He's my conscience telling me what's in store, He's my emotions showing me what I've done, Will my games be all done and gone?, No more playing with tender hearts, This is where the new person starts, Change my ways and be strong, Because my conscience knew it all along. ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"no more playing with tender hearts this is where new person starts". I like these lines. Nice poem. Good rhyme. |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
thankx Danny you always know what to say and you always seem to make my day. thankx again Bye! "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jennye~ I loved this poem. It describes you, and what it is you tell me so often. Smile, chica, I love ya! ~Kristi Lynn |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Thankx kristi you are still my best firend and thankx for telling me about this site cuz it also gave me a chance to express myself in ways of poetry too!!! Luvz ya chicka! ~JeNnYeMeShAn~   "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Good job Jenny, I enjoyed this a lot  |
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