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Teen Poetry #2

Life VS Death

devil_tongue
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 50

0 posted 2000-03-03 01:46 AM

Life is such a chore,
There is so much to do.
It all seems so pointless though,
To do it all without you.

I can't lie about my feelings,
It is you that I want to see.
I want you back here alive,
To do it all with me.

I'd kept it a secret now,
For such a long time.
But surely everybody knows,
That I wanted you to be mine.

You need to be here with me,
That crash should never have come.
All that I want to do now,
Is go after him in vensom.

Someday you'll be in my reach,
Breathing in my air.
But as long as I am alive,
Your death will be always unfair.

Gadget28
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States

1 posted 2000-03-03 03:46 AM

Even though this was a very sad poem, it was also very good! I congradulare you!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-03-03 03:53 AM

A very sad poem but well written. HUGS tracie

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