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binky_bec
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-02-28 03:23 AM

whenever will this feeling stop?
of unease and knowing not
what that person really thinks
their thoughts are that missing link
in the chain of my piece of mind
welcome would be a sign
that we exist in what we call this
a neverending state of bliss
for i can never cease the thoughts
that constantly and forever daunt
on what will happen if my fears come true
whatever would i do without you?

Bec

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-02-28 09:30 AM

Great poem, Bec. You have a great start

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

2 posted 2000-02-28 11:07 PM

Good job becca! And welcome to Passions!

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

3 posted 2000-02-29 11:57 PM

Without Who????
Welcome to the forum
nice entrance.

I'm sad you live with any level of paranoia.
Consider the Prince Of Peace your
"missing link" never ending bliss sometimes
known as Joy all of this is yours
given freely by God through his son

JESUS

I'm no preacher only know what I've been
through and wish I had heard and read more about Him along time ago.

binky_bec
New Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 7

4 posted 2000-03-01 02:46 AM

thanx for the comments

Paul: this is a poem about the torment and stress i relive everyday at being apart from the one i love....i'm just worried that as easily as i found him....i may just as easily lose him.

Bec

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2000-03-01 03:35 AM

Welcome Bec and what a lovely poem

I think that you are wayyyyy to paranoid because you and I both know that if is he as devoted as he says he is he will never, ever leave you. If you he does send him round to me ok.

~AF~

trevorskogsbergh
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

6 posted 2000-03-02 07:32 PM

That was a cool poem. It reminded me of that scene in Willy Wonka when they're on the boat and Willy's giving his little speech and as he's speaking his vioce gets louder and louder. Anyways, I'm dumb. Cool poem.
Trevor

Better to die, and sleep
The never-waking sleep, than linger on
And dare to live when the souls life is gone.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 2000-03-02 10:02 PM

I can definitely relate to this sometimes. Exellent work here, keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

8 posted 2000-03-03 10:26 AM

Just be yourself!
Your obviously a beautiful person
as far as I can read.
You have to try not to stress
over this type of thing.
"If you love him let him go
if he returns maybe it is meant to be"
and "There are other fish in the sea"
Concentrate on your own development
of your other interests
and keep on writing.

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