Teen Poetry #2 |
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Friend, Don't Leave |
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dixie_stix3309 Junior Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 11 |
When in times, we are apart is when our friendship leaves the heart. When one leaves the room of "friends" a "smack" session soon begins When words of hatered flee the mouth or a "friend" that keeps you in doubt It makes me want to scream and shout because my love for you comes out Friend, how can I trust thee? Because I'll be the next to leave. How can I put trust at hand, when words of hatred come from man. I am different from you my friend I'll stand by you 'till the end. And when the end does come I'll know, becuase the anger soon will show. And even then I'll cry and tear, because my friend, that is my fear. Of our trust falling to the ground, like an ancient baby doll. All the tears and laughter throuhg the years that we've shared, all that now will smear. And you I know, will move on and grow and memories or our friendship won't show. Friend, i've known your for a few short years but still it seems throughout my life, we've shared laughter,and some tears. Friend this is my way of hoping, that our relationship keeps growing. I know at times we say thoughts out loud, but please, it's better than pushing to the ground. Friend when I don't know why your mad, it makes me feel extremely sad. I wish you'd tell me first at hand, but then I hear it in the end. But friend what hurts me most of all, is knowing you weren't mad at all. But extremely sad like me, and thinking that I was mad. So friend you see, I wish for you to talk to me- Because in the end, I fear that our friendship will end, in future years... |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Welcome To Passions! This was a very nice and well written poem. P.S. Besure to check your e-mail! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions! great first post. I can relate to this in many ways. thanks for sharing it. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Welcome to Passioins. This and your other work is really good. See other responses. Danny |
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