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since 1999-12-29
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0 posted 2000-02-23 11:45 PM

As my heart pounds out a tune,
So different in time,
Beating softly then loudly,
No one can hear my song,
So I share it alone.

As I sit and ponder,
The lights go dem,
The song that pounds my heart,
Is heard on the radio,
You see me smile,
Then I cry,
For now you know my song.

I wonder weather you are laughing at me,
For I can not see,
The lights are dem,
You are in the shadow,
All I can do is sit and cry,
For you know my song.

You start walking toward me,
Iget up and leave,
For at the moment,
I wish not to be found,
For my heart has no song to carry.

I got to my favorite spot,
I think and poner,
I hear a birds quit song,
And I know that you are near,
They try to give my spot away,
But I leave before you see me,
I run untill I can run no more.

I have lost my song,
But slowly I hear a new,
And you are there right behind me,
I try to run,
But I have no energy left.

As you touched my arm,
I looked into your eyes,
I seen a glemer in your eyes,
A sparkle that shared the song that beats in your heart,
For then I know that everyting would be alright.

this one is brandi's she wrote it when we got to know each other if you want to email her her email is

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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-02-28 11:57 PM

FREE MAHI MAHI!! FREE MAHI MAHI!! *ahem* oh yes, the poem... i think this is pretty good... it's not quite up my alley, but i do understand the sentiment... tell your friend she did a good job  

jerome the mysterious priest

 Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
--[billy corgan]--

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-29 01:22 PM

Nice poem.   e-mail sent to author.

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