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Teen Poetry #2

your love makes me

ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

0 posted 1999-10-24 04:15 AM

Your love makes me immortal,

your love, breaths joy into my life,
your life, breaths love to give me joy,
as we both cry joy through tears,
love the foundation of our friendship will last for years.
For what is stronger than our friendship?
the power of our minds? a memory to last the test of time?
what we have is so strong, together we can both cause stone to bleed tears of submission,
that is what the strength of our love pocesses,
in the eyes of Cupids intuition.

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

1 posted 1999-10-25 07:25 PM

Very nice poem! It is great to hear someone so happy with so much dispair and depression in so many people. I like the way the words just tell of complete joy...! Keep up the good work!

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-10-25 08:09 PM

You are a very great poet ANON. I like your work. And btw welcome to passionate forums.Keep posting and ill keep reading

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ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

3 posted 1999-10-25 08:40 PM

thanks guys, i'm starting to like this poetry stuff hehe
thankyou for noticing

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