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since 2000-02-16
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Peoria, Arizona, United States

0 posted 2000-02-18 11:28 PM

Hope everyone likes it thanks again for the input on pat poems.


I remember why I first fell for you.
However I don't know how it lasted so long.
I remeber you made me laugh.
I just don't know how you kept me laughing.
You were always the joker loved by all.
Then you got your hands on drugs and started killing
You became less and less fun and were no longer
    loved by all.
You said you did it cause it made you funny but it
    really made you violent and scary.
I wanted to help you but I couldn't.
I moved closer and you would move further away.
My laughter changed to tears, your jokes ot violent
So now I say I know I can't help you until you
     decide it's time.
Maybe you'll know what we could of been after the
     possibilites are gone.
As i leave you I wish you the best and tell you to
     remember I will always love you.

-Stacye Walters-

© Copyright 2000 Stacey Carroll - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
1 posted 2000-02-19 04:52 AM

Nice poem. I know what it feels like dude.


Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-19 12:09 PM

Very sad story.  Expresses well what the dangers are from drugs. Unfortunately, it ruined your relationship.
Good writing!

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