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Teen Poetry #2

This feeling

Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

0 posted 1999-10-23 06:58 AM

I remember your dark, brown eyes
That sparkled in the lights
and them a sexy look
that drive me crazy inside

You make me feel special
And that I had a reason for life
but inside
deep inside
I know the truth
Nothing this sweet could stay w/ me
But instead leave me blue.

I didn't just fall in love w/ a boy
That takes alot of nerve
I fell in love w/ man
And for once am getting what I desire.

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

Please reply to this. This is the first time I have ever posted a poem of mine. Tell me if I should keep them to myself.

[This message has been edited by Poetic Dreams (edited 10-23-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-23 05:41 PM

Poetic Dreams:

You peom was pretty good. And please do keep posting, both poems and replies. The teen forum has been very slow as of late, and I am trying to get as many member s that sign up to keep posting. So please do post replies for every poem you post.....and you will get more replies in return.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Sweet Smoke
New Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 8
Kailua-Kona, HI, USA

2 posted 1999-10-23 07:37 PM

familiar feeling, love the poem

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~all that we see is but a dream within a dream~

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