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Teen Poetry #2

As a tulip by a pond...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-23 01:16 AM

As a tulip by a pond
Glues its roots to its reflection
Lipstick sticks two lips together
In a bond of their affection

Lips did meet and froze their pose
Eyes are closed and years are passing
But as they separate their grasping
Water smears, and love is lost

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I fell in love and kept on falling

darksideofthesun
Junior Member

since 1999-10-21

Posts 12

1 posted 1999-10-23 01:29 PM

wow, nice job!!!makes you think!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 1999-10-24 11:48 AM

A very interesting simile, Master, and a nice poem.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-10-24 05:35 PM

Thanks

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