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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-02-13 04:32 PM



my heart's hanging open can't you see
i'm bleeding on the floor
losing my mind in a sea of irony

the forgotten came back last night
came back and i opened the door
thought i'd have one last look
thought it was her at my door

i was wrong last night
opening my door i seen
nothing but shadows
chanting of her vanity

the darnkess grabed me
wrenching me to the ground
death had come to take me
killing myself is what i found

so i unlocked myself
let it be free
i lost my mind back there
in a sea of irony

2-12-00

 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity."

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
poetic_butterfly
Junior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 25
illinois, usa
1 posted 2000-02-14 11:40 PM


very nice. i really love it. you are a very nice poet, hoppy. and by the way, the quote in your sig couldn't hold more truth.
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