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READTHIS-"hard enough" |
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darksideofthesun Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 12 |
cut the deck and deal it blind transparent's hard to have to find ice is warm when we are cold invisible's hard to have to hold smiles hard enough to bequeath whenthere's nothing underneath hard to have faith in things above when there's nothing left to love sleep, baby, sleep the days seem longer when you weep cry, baby, cry the river rages, bleeding dry it's hard enough to be a saint when everyone has lost the faith hard enough to face the fears when the illusions disappear hush, now, bow your head there are worse things yet to dread. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I really like this poem, but I don't understand the 2nd and 4th lines.....could you explain? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
very powerful poem! i like ur style... keep up the good work.. ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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darksideofthesun Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 12 |
lines 2 and 4 describe the searching that goes on in life- most of the time we dont know what we are really looking for- and when we find it, we don't realize it. thanks for reading!!! |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really like this poem too. I think I understand what you mean in lines 2 and 4. Keep up the good work! |
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