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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
I’m stuck between two guys What should I do? The first guy is sweet the other is too. I want a relationship…but I don’t know With who… What can I do? I can just keep them both And try to be slick Or just choose one and forget all the tricks… I want to do what’s right And follow my heart… But I have no idea where to start… Which one is better, which one will care… If they find out about each other I’ll be left no where. I know this wont be easy I’m really not amused… my mind controls my heart leaving me confused ??? |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
Hey, i liked your poem. Especially the rhyme scheme. "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Let your heart control your mind....no more problems....excellent poem.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very Sweet. Go with what your heart tells you to do, not what others say. that has always worked best for me : Keep up the good work!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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