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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-02-09 11:43 AM

I’m stuck between two guys
What should I do?
The first guy is sweet the other is too.
I want a relationship…but I don’t know
With who…
What can I do?
I can just keep them both
And try to be slick
Or just choose one and forget all the tricks…
I want to do what’s right
And follow my heart…
But I have no idea where to start…
Which one is better, which one will care…
If they find out about each other
I’ll be left no where.
I know this wont be easy
I’m really not amused…
my mind controls my heart
leaving me confused

© Copyright 2000 Kristina Gomez - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56

1 posted 2000-02-09 12:55 PM

Hey, i liked your poem. Especially the rhyme scheme.

 "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh
it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE

since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
2 posted 2000-02-09 12:57 PM

Let your heart control your more problems....excellent poem..

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
4 posted 2000-02-09 12:59 PM

Very Sweet. Go with what your heart tells you to do, not what others say. that has always worked best for me : Keep up the good work!  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

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