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chic
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since 2000-01-26
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yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-07 09:30 AM





Once alone
always shy.
This was me
before u said hi.

I wasn't sure
if it was true.
Had I found
a friend in you?

We grew closer
as the years went by.
We shared alot,
we'd laugh, we'd cry.

Everything was great
Then like the dew in
the morning.
You were gone
without warning.

I was alone again
lost and confused.
I felt cheated
worthless and used.

How could this happen
to someone so nice?
I had to find answers
or atleast some advice.

I met someone
in this time of sadness.
And as things progressed
it changed to gladness.

We are friends
and we have fun.
But you could never be replaced
not by anyone.

Although ur not here
your face I cannot see.
We will always be FRIENDS
while your memory is with me.

This is a spontaneous poem so don't be to hard
      


© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-07 09:36 AM


*sniff*   nice poem sis...who is it for?
chic
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Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
2 posted 2000-02-07 09:41 AM


I don't really know sis it just came to me while i was reading all the poems and replies. I don't really know
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with you
3 posted 2000-02-08 01:02 PM


Chic, I really like this! It's neat that you just made it up on the spir of the moment. Poems do not always have to come from personal experiences. "Just because" is as good a reason as any!   -SEA
Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
4 posted 2000-02-08 06:09 PM


Great poem, this could easily apply to my life. I had a best friend of 9 years suddenly stop talking to me. I never did find out why. If you never had to experience this yourself, be grateful, and never let your friends dissapear  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
5 posted 2000-02-08 10:15 PM


ditto mistikman..similar experience here..ah well....such is life eh?...hehe..for spur of the moment ..this is great...to me..this is the best way to write...

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
6 posted 2000-02-09 09:23 AM


thanx mistik and majestic for the replies and thanx to the rest of ya'll i usually write poems on the spur of the moment i dunno why it just happens

 To be or not to be...that is the question.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
7 posted 2000-02-10 11:28 AM


Spontaneous is good and so is your poem.
Danny

chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
8 posted 2000-02-10 12:04 PM


thanx danny, do u have any poems? if so tell me so i can check them out

 To be or not to be...that is the question.

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
9 posted 2000-02-10 05:59 PM


spontaneous is the best, i love spontaneous, if you coulda made that one quintet match with the rest of the quartets it woulda been better technically, emotionally i'll have to say i dig it 'cause it portrays a universal feeling that all of us have had at one point.

rich-pa

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
10 posted 2000-02-10 08:34 PM


This is great chic. It shows that people are understanding one another and insperation is coming out of the work here. Great job.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

melmel02
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since 2000-02-10
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11 posted 2000-02-10 08:42 PM


Great poem!  I really liked it.

 *~Mel~*

chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
12 posted 2000-02-11 09:20 AM


chic curtsey's and say's thank you thank you i love u all thank you...thank's for the replies on
chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
13 posted 2000-02-11 09:20 AM


chic curtsey's and say's thank you thank you i love u all thank you...thank's for the replies on

 To be or not to be...that is the question.

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
14 posted 2000-02-11 10:55 AM


Chic, I loved your poem.  I just hate to admit that I had a few experiences of what you were saying...  My best friend is from Brazil- she was an extange student at my school 2 years ago...   *Sniff*  And another close friend was an extange student from Germany last year...  Gee, do you think that i get along well with extange students?  But, like I said, I love your poem, and I plan on sending it to both of them.  
~Kristi Lynn  


 "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me

chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
15 posted 2000-02-11 12:18 PM


thanx Kristi I know how u feel about the exchange students i'm the same way...except i'm great with kids so all my friends are little kids(well not all) but anyway thanx again and i hope ur friends like it
chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
16 posted 2000-02-11 12:18 PM


thanx Kristi I know how u feel about the exchange students i'm the same way...except i'm great with kids so all my friends are little kids(well not all) but anyway thanx again and i hope ur friends like it

 To be or not to be...that is the question.

Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
17 posted 2000-02-11 02:03 PM


Sweet poem......it really gets me in the heart (i actually got tears in my eye).  Very well put poem....I cant wait for more to come.
-Ender

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

18 posted 2000-02-12 02:21 AM


This is so sad....oh I had a few tears in my eyes. It reminds me of a really good friend of mine. We drifted apart so fast and it was like we weren't even close. This is a very nice poem chic.....I love your work.

Salma

rachella
Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39
Indiana
19 posted 2000-02-12 11:34 AM


Chic, thanks for the poem. As graduation is coming up for me this whole topic of drifting apart and leaving has been on my mind. It always helps to think that we can always make new friends even if they aren't like our old ones. Great job!
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