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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Once alone always shy. This was me before u said hi. I wasn't sure if it was true. Had I found a friend in you? We grew closer as the years went by. We shared alot, we'd laugh, we'd cry. Everything was great Then like the dew in the morning. You were gone without warning. I was alone again lost and confused. I felt cheated worthless and used. How could this happen to someone so nice? I had to find answers or atleast some advice. I met someone in this time of sadness. And as things progressed it changed to gladness. We are friends and we have fun. But you could never be replaced not by anyone. Although ur not here your face I cannot see. We will always be FRIENDS while your memory is with me. This is a spontaneous poem so don't be to hard     |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
*sniff*  nice poem sis...who is it for? |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I don't really know sis it just came to me while i was reading all the poems and replies. I don't really know |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Chic, I really like this! It's neat that you just made it up on the spir of the moment. Poems do not always have to come from personal experiences. "Just because" is as good a reason as any!  -SEA |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem, this could easily apply to my life. I had a best friend of 9 years suddenly stop talking to me. I never did find out why. If you never had to experience this yourself, be grateful, and never let your friends dissapear I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
ditto mistikman..similar experience here..ah well....such is life eh?...hehe..for spur of the moment ..this is great...to me..this is the best way to write... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx mistik and majestic for the replies and thanx to the rest of ya'll i usually write poems on the spur of the moment i dunno why it just happens To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Spontaneous is good and so is your poem. Danny |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx danny, do u have any poems? if so tell me so i can check them out To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
spontaneous is the best, i love spontaneous, if you coulda made that one quintet match with the rest of the quartets it woulda been better technically, emotionally i'll have to say i dig it 'cause it portrays a universal feeling that all of us have had at one point. rich-pa |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
This is great chic. It shows that people are understanding one another and insperation is coming out of the work here. Great job. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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melmel02 New Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 4 |
Great poem! I really liked it. *~Mel~* |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
chic curtsey's and say's thank you thank you i love u all thank you...thank's for the replies on |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
chic curtsey's and say's thank you thank you i love u all thank you...thank's for the replies on To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Chic, I loved your poem. I just hate to admit that I had a few experiences of what you were saying... My best friend is from Brazil- she was an extange student at my school 2 years ago... *Sniff* And another close friend was an extange student from Germany last year... Gee, do you think that i get along well with extange students? But, like I said, I love your poem, and I plan on sending it to both of them. ~Kristi Lynn  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx Kristi I know how u feel about the exchange students i'm the same way...except i'm great with kids so all my friends are little kids(well not all) but anyway thanx again and i hope ur friends like it |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx Kristi I know how u feel about the exchange students i'm the same way...except i'm great with kids so all my friends are little kids(well not all) but anyway thanx again and i hope ur friends like it To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Sweet poem......it really gets me in the heart (i actually got tears in my eye). Very well put poem....I cant wait for more to come. -Ender |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is so sad....oh I had a few tears in my eyes. It reminds me of a really good friend of mine. We drifted apart so fast and it was like we weren't even close. This is a very nice poem chic.....I love your work. Salma |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
Chic, thanks for the poem. As graduation is coming up for me this whole topic of drifting apart and leaving has been on my mind. It always helps to think that we can always make new friends even if they aren't like our old ones. Great job! |
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