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encounter New Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 4 |
first off, this is a poem that is supposed to have been written as if by a child, so... just know that this is as seen from a kids point of view. Fair Weather I have a little buggy, He is my perfect friend, I'll always love my buggy, and Protect him to the end. My little buggy friend is red, He is a lady is he, Happily crawling, flyswatter, I didn't like the look he gave me. fuzzy wuzzy was a bear, fuzzy wuzzy had no hair, fuzzy wuzzy wasn't fuzzy, was he. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Heh, funny poem, I like it. Welcome to passions. Since you are near here I will give you a few suggestions(which I plan to give to all new poets here from this point on) 1) Post lots of responses to others poetry, if you do it enough, people will start to recognize you by name and respond more to your poetry. 2) Do not post more than 1 or 2 poems at one time, it tends to spam the board and generally irritate people, this is one of the 2 main ways to not get responses to your poems. 3) The second way to not get responses is to put please respond in the title, dont do it, it just bugs people  4) Respect is number one here, respect others and they will respect you. 5) whatever else they cover in the guidelines for the forum, such as no cussing, no glorifying violence etc. etc.Well, with all that out of the way, let me say again, welcome to passions! I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
encounter: welcome to passions... i like this one a lot... *SPLAT!!*  *waa haa haa haa* dead buggy... sincerely, jerome the boy with the flyswatter hand A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welocme to Passions. I enjoyed this piece, the flow was wonderful! Jerome....*Speaking in my motherly moderators tone* How many times have I told you to play nice with the new children? Now apologize to the nice boy/girl and go wash your hands. We will talk of your punishment later. |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
very cute little piece, lighted my mood a bit "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. NEW POETRY FORUM ADDED Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Welcome to Passions Encounter! This was a very interesting writing. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, this is cute. Loved it. I think we could have figured it was from a child's point of view.  |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome to Passions! Nice poem, cute, poor buggy. I love red ladybugs, but I like butterflies more. But cute, nonetheless, and I enjoyed it. And again, welcome, welcome, welcome! I hope you'll enjoy it here. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Welcome to passions!! This was very cute! Put me in a silly mood. Can't wait to read more! ~Sarah |
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