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Minnie
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-02-01 11:28 PM


I wish I could turn back the pages of time
Maybe things would be different
We would be together forever
But something happened
I only wish I could turn back the pages
One night has changed forever
This has not only hurt you
It has hurt the one you love
This wasn't suppose to happen
We were supposed to last forever
How could we last now?
I never thought it would hurt so bad
There are not enough stars in the sky
To have this wish come true
I wish I could turn back the pages of time
To when things were better
So many mistakes and risks wouldn't of been taken
Hopefully it won't be as bad as it seems
And this will only make us stronger in the end
But in the end I hope we don't loose each other
I don't want to wonder "what if....?"


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The Haunted Poet
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 37
Sumner Washington
1 posted 2000-02-01 11:53 PM


Wow, there is a lot of emotion in this poem. I also wish I could turn back the pages of time but the truth is you can't and it sucks! Excellent poem, I think I'll read your others....
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