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One Mistake.....
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One Mistake..... |
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KiKi Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 15 |
One Mistake ruined it all That great friendship that we had Was soon about to fall We moved too fast And forgot to think We both knew it wouldn't last We were best friends That got too close too quick we didn't think Before we acted and ruined something great But it is all over now we are not what we used to be not nearly that way at all But each day we move a little closer thank god I thought I lost you But you came back I Knew you would but no the way I wanted you I know deep in my heart That I do love you but I know you don't feel that same But all I can do Is wish and pray for that day that you will come back to me..... This is my first poem so I don't know how good it is...... |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome to Passions! I like the poem and if this is your first, it seems we're in for a lot of good poetry as soon as you write more. Lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
For a first poem this was pretty good!  I know how you feel...it's hard when you have feelings for your best friend. Can't wait to hear more from you!!~Sarah |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Welcome to Passion! The is a great first post. I know so weel of the love you speak of! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions! Seems to me you are dealing well with this situation and it is working out. I congratulate you for that. This is a good first poem and we willbe looking forward to seeing more from you. If you need any help or would like a critique of your work just ask. The poets here are great and will give you any help you need. Check your e-mail for a special greeting. |
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