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a real weird love poem......but good when given to the right person
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a real weird love poem......but good when given to the right person |
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Voyce Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 13Colorado |
When we fell love It controls us What we do What we say Is all controlled by love By our feelings So, when we say “I love you” We mean it Because it can’t be said Without that feeling Without the knowledge That we are in love *note*-this poem is free to anyone for their own use, and i dont even have to have recpognition. i would reccomend giving this poem to a loved one when a relationship is in trouble. But, do not post this somewhere else and say it is yours. i only give permission to use this poems in personal exchanges, such as the example given. thank you, and good luck |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this poem!  It is so short and simple yet so expressive. Long time no see, Voyce. The last time I cmae to the forums you had just finished being Ender.Who are you now? |
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