a song i wrote for my band

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Teen Poetry #2

a song i wrote for my band

The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 2000-01-30 06:37 PM

nothin feels so strange.
the whole world seems deranged
she drinks her self to sleep.
or so she thinks while on her knees

shes got Daniels in a bottle
OL' granddad in a glass
as shes takes it down so smoothly
not seeing.... (shes falling fast!!)

Yeahhhh,drinking everyday!
drifting all away
its fallin into place
from lack of smiles on her face

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So im drinking!!,and falling!!!
The neighbors are calling!!!
There always givin
they cant stop my livin
Im drinkin and falling!!!
they can here me callin!!!
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So im all gone to waist
im there with yesterday
Left behind gates
hesitating as she waits

shes back down on her knees
doing wat he needs
drinking every day
watching it flow away.

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So im drinking!!,and falling!!!
The neighbors are calling!!!
There always givin
they cant stop my livin
Im drinkin and falling!!!
they can here me callin!!!
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Mike sakcs

I wish i were a poet

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

1 posted 2000-01-30 07:28 PM

(In responce to your sig.)I think you are.
maybe a little too repetative, but its a good poem.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

2 posted 2000-01-30 07:29 PM

oh, its a song, thats good then.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

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