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Teen Poetry #2

Sumtimes

Shasta
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 24
st augustine florida

0 posted 1999-10-18 05:25 PM

Sumtimes on a clear starry night
you can see a full moon burning bright
You can see all the love, all the passion, all the hate.

Sumtimes its just the love.
Sumtimes its just the hate.
Or
Sumtimes it could be both
it all depends on what we're
able to see.

Sumtimes we cant see anything at all
only because we've forgotten how
to believe in what really matter and
Then.
We grow. And cant see anything but
a blur...

For a time.

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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-18 07:39 PM

Very interesting poem. Might I suggest using the correct spelling of sometimes?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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