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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-30 10:13 PM

Rainbow hued droplets gently spiral earthbound,
Floating softly upon the vividly glittered breeze.
My mind is silent and I deeply cherish the sound,
Mild calmness quieting my tempest wrought seas.

Leaves of hunter colored velvet, silken to touch,
Carefully woven into a vivid tapestry of life.
I never knew heavenly starlight shined this much,
I never knew a thought could destroy all strife.

Creamy mists of white hover upon the silver grass,
The icy beauty shining within your sparkled eyes.
Our love brushes life upon this land so vast,
Flooding the brightened, gleaming sapphire skies.

Forever is ours for the taking upon this horizon,
Eternity is here, within the embrace of your arms.
The fire of our passion rages like the morning sun,
And when I wake from dreams, you shall keep me from harm.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-01 03:41 AM

Elegant verse, dear friend.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Raven
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

2 posted 1999-10-08 03:13 PM

Your poems paint pictures I can see when I read your poetry.

*~Raven~*

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~*She's going to change the world. But she can't change me.*~

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-17 09:53 AM

I agree with Raven...your words paint a vivid picture...one I hope I can someday live. For contented love is a beautiful thing indeed, while troubled love will rip your heart to shreds. I hope my love soon becomes as beautiful as the love in your poem.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-10-17 08:41 PM

I too wish that for you, Systematic Decay. But even contented love has its troubles from time to time.

Thank you all very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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